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ALONE
Contributed by
bobbylee22
on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 08:49:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I WAS SO MUCH IN LOVE
thought everything was grand
TILL THAT ONE DAY
i just felt all bland
TURNS OUT SHE CHEATED
promised no more
TURNED AROUND AND LIED
like a rug on the floor
CALL ME CRAZY
call me insane
I WANT HER BACK
cuz im in pain
I KEEP CRYING
i just cant stop
I CANT EVEN HIDE IT
why is it like this
WHY ALWAYS ME
put me in pain
NOONE EVER CAN SEE
im scared help me
DONT LET ME BE
alone
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bobbylee22
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2009-05-09 20:49:43]
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Re: ALONE
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by thumper on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 08:57:46 PM AEST
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Good write. I can feel your pain and disappointment in this poem. Welcome to ypdc, I hope you use this site often, as it is a good way to free your mind and soul. :o) But you already knew that, didn't you? lol Things will get better, I promise. ;o)
Love you,
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Re: ALONE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 09:52:33 PM AEST
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Gramma Thumps is right....it WILL get better.. Continue expressing your pain thru poetry..it does help...
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni
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