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A letter to the end.
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 08:30:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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To the end
I whisper to you my sweet friend
things have finally winded down
nothing left to do but beg for the loss
nothing left to do but let the show run.
I dreamed about you the other night
breathing the dust of the dead
and keeping warm from the blood of the bewildered
but we both know this miracle will come.
You whispered to me the time is almost right
the confusion has almost run its coarse
the streets are lined with the dumb
and there is nothing left to do but run.
Hold me in the night
let your sword be dull from the salt of the sea
come lets play in the fields of yesteryear
lets get ready for the fight.
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2009-05-09 20:30:38]
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Re: A letter to the end.
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by simsalabim on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 09:35:41 PM AEST
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put it on credit.....heh
bE agressive....it's your's now. |
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Re: A letter to the end.
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by CMkelly on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 11:39:07 PM AEST
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Wow,this poem is very interesting.
The words you have used are good.
thankyou for a great read. |
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Re: A letter to the end.
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by MorguesMatter on
Thursday, 29th October 2009 @ 08:27:19 AM AEST
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So much depth, I felt the forces uniting in this one wounded yet ready to die for the cause Haven't felt that since I saw Casa Blanca for the first time, refreshing.Morgue
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Re: A letter to the end.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 10:44:17 PM AEST
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| Strong piece, flows nicely |
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