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Lonely wizzard (part 2)
Contributed by
shanat
on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 06:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Down by the river watching the current flow past
i had almost nodded off when the screams of drowning bird flew past me fast
i exploded with a dive and cuped hm in my hand
i said your alright little bloke just next time try and stay on land
i paddled and paddled but one arm wasnt enough
i said hold on little bloke things might get alittle bit rough
i held high in the air as we were swept further down the creek
i said mate i can save you but for me things a looking pretty bleek
alright mate before we hit the rapids im gunna launch you into the sky
i want you to give it all you`ve got i want you to try and fly
we hit the first rapid and i flung him with all my thunder
but i didnt see him land the rapids had sucked me under
bouncing off and banging into rocks i split my head on a tree
i resurfaced just long enough for the rapids to set me free
there i was exhausted face down in the sand
when i heard a familiar voice, young squire looks like you need a hand:)
Wizzard, oh my god how long has it been?
it`s been a few years now squire far to long in between
we sat down together and talked about the past
wizzard i know about your dad but just had to ask
he put his hand on my back and said my friend death comes to us all
i loved my father very much from the very day i could crawl
but it was you who brought me back remember, with a good ol glass of wine
time stood still for a while, untill you bought me a vine
i put my hand on his back and said mate im so proud of you
you deserve it more than any bugga i know after all you`ve been through
squire your generous, compassionate, loving and very smart
there is no questioning your thortfulness, your careing or even the size of your heart
hold out your hand squire
i now declaire you guardian, and protector of all that is flora
this day is marked forever, and as one with all the fauna.
be well guardian;)
Copyright ©
shanat
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2009-05-09 18:53:37]
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Re: Lonely wizzard (part 2)
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by simsalabim on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 09:30:04 PM AEST
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| i didn't read the whole thing but just from a glance you misspelled a lot... |
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Re: Lonely wizzard (part 2)
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by shanat on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 01:37:31 AM AEST
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| i`m sorry i was in such a mad rush to get it posted, i didnt have time to check and i would`nt have got the chance again for quite a while, apologies:( |
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Re: Lonely wizzard (part 2)
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by musicrox13 on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 07:10:06 PM AEST
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| i really like it it was so cool!! |
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