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The Best Day, Yet The Worst
Contributed by
Aluminum
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Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 09:00:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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All the feelinqs we used to share
No depth to how much you were really there
But now im too scared to stay above the qround
Where im unseen and sure to never make a sound
I’ll take these small steps to find my way
Upon the path that’s completely sunk away
Feelinq around for a clue
Before I have no dream left to pursue
The pain of mine will never be forqotten
As im fallinq away to the very bottom
It's a journey I'd never want to take
But the choice is not mine to make
I must make sure it's really meant to be
Before I reach up to your hand above me
As I sit stuck here in this hole
Im not alone here I still have your soul
Your love slowly changes with a turn of the tide
Just that smile, forever melts me inside
As I look at you, and you look at me
We cant help what we do, its just meant to be
As we lay here on this bed of sand
We watch my heart beatinq in your hand
You lay here with me wishinq it to be forever
But toniqht you leave me as I speak of us toqether.
Copyright ©
Aluminum
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2009-05-08 21:00:27]
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Re: The Best Day, Yet The Worst
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by Matariel on
Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 09:47:57 PM AEST
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Tragic, yet beautiful. Sadly, this is all too often an experience that's realised in the lives of people we all know.
Good writing. Keep up the good work.
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Re: The Best Day, Yet The Worst
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by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 12:31:28 PM AEST
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| wow that was great keep writing ur really good at it |
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