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UntitledReflections upon the teachings of my peers
Contributed by
27darryl27
on
Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 03:36:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Messages remained in the aura of time,
Reciprication of your verbal fable, as the hourglass
begins to shed its golden crop.
Speaking to allow the audacious revelation
of true self, attention certainly focused your way.
Communicating to them bombasticaly through the guise
of a different moniker.
The admirable status of your words,
articulated to such a capacity of skill,
my people turn to let it in, but not I,
no.
I, however, understand.
I see through the harsh material of your almost brilliant lies,
so near perfect, so near destruction.
If you wish to speak, then so be it,
speak to me, tell me the truth of reality.
Yes, i shall listen to the heart, to the voice of your open mouth.
You will not decieve me into your concept, the falsity of status.
Bestow only upon me honesty.
Allow me to believe what you could not, believe in me,
believe in yourself.
Be higher than the average ground on which we are placed to remain.
Then, seek me when you can see through anothers eyes.
See you soon, my rival
my friend.
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27darryl27
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2009-05-08 03:36:11]
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Re: UntitledReflections upon the teachings of my peers
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 11:52:32 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem. you have showed passion of whats good n bad in this poem. iliked it. |
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Re: UntitledReflections upon the teachings of my peers
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by elle on
Friday, 8th May 2009 @ 04:39:01 PM AEST
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| excellent. . . let us consider the uses of adversity. . . elle |
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