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Perception
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 06:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The door opens. At the threshold stands a man. Beyond the man, there is sunlight, a street, and across the street, there is a house with an open door, and a man standing on the threshold of the door.
The door opens, and the sunlight polices the threshold of the door, and before the sunlight, stands a man. Behind the man, there is a street, across the street, there is a house with an open door, and sunlight guards the back of a man in the threshold of the door.
The door opens, and the sunlight rides the back of a man standing in the threshold of the door. Across the street, there is a man standing in the threshold of an open door, sunlight splitting across his back.
The door opens the sunlight and a man stands at the threshold of the door. Across the street there is a house opening the sunlight to a man in the threshold of the door.
The door opens. A man stands in the threshold of the door, the sunlight behind him. Across the street, another man at another house stands in the threshold of an open door, the sunlight behind him.
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Re: Perception
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by slayer_015 on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 08:19:42 PM AEST
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a thinking man's poem.
Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brian |
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Re: Perception
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by razorbladekisses on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 08:27:21 PM AEST
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| haha, I liked this(: |
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