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For love is to late
Contributed by
imabillier
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Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 05:26:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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For thee love has come
But love is not love
For in the end hate will come
For above
Comes the love I need
For now love still comes
For the love is like a seed
Later death will come
Then everlasting peace
But down here love is hate
For i wish that be ceased
But the love is to late
For now i die
I say two words: good bye
Copyright ©
imabillier
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2009-05-07 17:26:42]
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Re: For love is to late
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by slayer_015 on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 08:23:35 PM AEST
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sadly beautiful.
good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: For love is to late
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by razorbladekisses on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 08:32:22 PM AEST
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I liked the ending.
"For now I die
I say two words: Good bye"
keep on writing.
RBkisses |
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