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I love it when
Contributed by
MissAnnonymous
on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 11:26:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love it when you say my name
And when you hold my hand
I love it when we're at the beach
Making castles with the sand
I love it when you make me laugh
with all the jokes you tell
I love it when I found out that
in love with you I fell
I love it when you always say
what I need to hear
I love it when I feel sick
so you always stay here
I love it when you hold me
and make me feel secure
I love it when I need you here
then you turn up at my door
I love it when you do the small things
that show me how much you care
I love it when we go away
just you and me somewhere
I love it when I look at you
and I get butterflies
But then you said you dont love me
and theres a part of me that died
Tell me what it was that I did wrong
that made you walk out on me
Tell me why you have changed your mind
Cos I love you, can't you see
I try to tell myself that I dont care
but my heart knows that I do
Back then, you and me became we
now it's back to just me and you
I know you know you're my everything
and I have loved you since day one
You once told me that you loved me too
so tell me why you've now gone
I loved it when you said my name
and when you held my hand
But like your mind the times have changed
and from your heart i'm banned
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MissAnnonymous
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2009-05-07 11:26:05]
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Re: I love it when
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by EmilyMichaela on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 01:13:10 PM AEST
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| This is seriously good, the ryhming is great it doesn't seem forced it's as if the words just happened to fit together. Really touching poem |
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Re: I love it when
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by Elipsis on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 10:11:32 AM AEST
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| This poem you have written has so much emotion to it, I could feel that cry for love... excellent! |
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