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Clouds in my Mind
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 09:40:14 PM in AEST
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This is true for me at least I saw all of this. I look into space a lot and just think so this is what happened when I stared and saw a lot of clouds everywhere. I may understand it better then most but maybe you'll get it if not just ask I'll tell
I looked up in the sky
In the stare of my eyes
here's what I saw
A train blowing out so much smoke
And the clouds all broke apart
Made different shapes of things
I saw two people a man and woman
A dinosaur then the sky was a blank plain
Then in the distance the clouds rose high
above what I could see from my eyes
I say a groups of clouds looked to much like a society
I saw clouds of such variety
as the smoke from the train came
The clouds changed and where never the same
After I saw the sky's smoke go into darkness
The clouds go to nothingness
the train still is going I can still see
It the smoke just seems to disappear right in front of me
The sky grew still in front of my eyes
And from watching the sky
It seems to show a passage of what happened over time
But maybe that's just in my mind
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Re: Clouds in my Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 10:34:32 AM AEST
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nice writing.
-Phil |
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Re: Clouds in my Mind
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by SirCallower on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 02:00:32 AM AEST
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good job
you have an interesting imagination |
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