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Gethsemene.
Contributed by
Incognito_Bombastus
on
Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 04:48:51 PM in AEST
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Gethsemene.
Circumference,
Indifference
The circle is hollow
Without his passion.
The toil of love in the hands of the earth.
The rancour of all seasons without the embrace of reunion.
The fallen figure prays
“Help me.”
In the garden of his love
He desires,
In the trees grow his thoughts.
In the earth he rests his body
& in violence the soul weeps.
May the union
Of life & death be
Concentric circles.
May all death be life,
May the ring be
Forged & turned
& Wedded.
May the circle be complete
& I in it.
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Incognito_Bombastus
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Re: Gethsemene.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 10:31:41 AM AEST
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good to see you here again I.B., i did wonder where you'd gone lol
a good write from you i thought, very descriptive.
-Phil
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Re: Gethsemene.
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by elle on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 06:43:40 PM AEST
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Ahhh, if only the circle could've gone unbroken. . .
in desperation, nay desolation, an exclusive agony did await. . .
so that we could enter in. might we become. .? may we embrace. . .?
behold the benediction of our souls. . .
Excellent return, I.B. Glad your back. elle |
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Re: Gethsemene.
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by Fairiepsycho on
Friday, 12th September 2014 @ 11:57:37 PM AEST
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| really felt the emotion. good write! |
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