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Circle
Contributed by
trialanderror
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Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Round the circle once again?
No, the pains to much to bear.
Just make the mark with this here pen.
And let them charge the fare?
The whistle! The whistle!
Ceases the uproar.
And off goes the pistol.
Hurry! Through the door!
Out comes the innocence
five years spent in the sun
and all it wants is just ten pence
So it can learn to run.
A murdered fathers son was born with innocence
and the trains fare is just ten pence.
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2009-05-05 19:11:02]
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Re: Circle
(User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:58:02 PM AEST
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| i like this poem, and the way you played around with words...great |
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Re: Circle
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 09:50:48 PM AEST
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| it was good for the catagory you put it in. kinda silly i think. i didnt really get it but it made me smile. |
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