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nirvana..
Contributed by
wazarov
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the light is off
and once again we are one
just try to see what i feel
and everything to you will be so real
touch me.. all my wounds will soon heal
and today i`m born
torn after i was born
the land of poetry is a shelter
the land of poetry
where misery and pain
are the only source of rain
rain that keeps the soil fertile
bringing everyday words and resurrecting souls..
in this land our sorrows are the only heroes
Copyright ©
wazarov
... [
2003-03-26 20:05:00]
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Re: nirvana..
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by kels497 on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:41:34 PM AEST
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| i like this poem, it had a nice flow to it. |
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Re: nirvana..
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:54:09 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: nirvana..
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:50:13 PM AEST
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| A lovely write. May you remain in this land always... |
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Re: nirvana..
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by knowWhat_kind on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 10:44:20 PM AEST
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good write,
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Re: nirvana..
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by flirtyrockstar on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:13:00 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, it's very original and the last line is excellent. |
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Re: nirvana..
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:28:55 AM AEST
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| a beautiful poem, i totally related to it |
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Re: nirvana..
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by Percursors on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:09:04 PM AEST
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| oh my God...wow...I loved this...great write... |
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Re: nirvana..
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 09:04:48 PM AEST
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Lovely one, Dean....
"the land of poetry is a shelter".... and a shield... so true...
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Re: nirvana..
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:52:55 PM AEST
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very nicely done, i very much enjoyed it
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