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Your Little Play Thing
Contributed by
TundraHydra
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm under your control and I don't know how
You say do this and do it Now!
I say yes sir and do what you say
You're pulling my strings like a puppet in a play
You say Jump
I ask how high
You say die
And I'm ready to comply
I never question your motives or actions
Never asking what or why
I can't seem to help myself
It's like I'm under a spell
But the spell is a curse and this place is a hell
You treat me like a little play thing
You break my spirit daily
The threats you hurl my way hurt but don't phase me
Often you remind me how with out you I'm nothing
How you could let me fall to my death after you cut my strings
You put words in my mouth that I would never say
Yet I don't reject them or push them away
You know I really hate you and I can't help but cringe
When I hear "Come out and PLAY!"
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TundraHydra
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2003-03-26 19:45:00]
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Re: Your Little Play Thing
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:00:17 PM AEST
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You have a talent with your poetry. No one should be made to feel like you do. Every one of us is special in some way. Believe in yourself. You are somebody all on your own.
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Re: Your Little Play Thing
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by knowWhat_kind on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:05:36 PM AEST
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| Man i hope you don't really feel that way cause if you do you don't need to be treated that way I wish you luck. |
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Re: Your Little Play Thing
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:29:22 AM AEST
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All I have to say is that certain levels of devotion are unhealthy. I realise how hard it can be when you care deeply about someone but NO-ONE has the right to make you feel like this. Your poetry shows that you are a very talented and special person. Don't let them treat you badly. *lecture over*
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