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Rising Up
Contributed by
JuniorWise
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Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 01:09:42 PM in AEST
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Ahhh, feel good don't it
If not man then you ain't on it
Straight out from household making
Underground city has begun shaking
New life lives, it breathes
You can feel the air under your sleeves
As the wind blows, you can catch a cold
Alright, here's a tip if you don't wanna be sick
Sure they could be sickening, but you probably won't be drowsy
If maybe you were listening
I may be kind of cocky with my attitude
I'm kind of rude with my solitude knowledge I gained over the past few
Secondly, we're shut off from all present tense
Forgot how life works, disregarding common sense
And Wow! What image
It's weird when you look at the life we are living
Irrelavent waiters waiting for the spotlight
Waiting for their chance to get their time, right?
And if I have wrong, then don't get me wrong
I never wanted to offend anyone in this song
But I see so much envious demonstration
That I believe we're being underestimated
I speak for the community, not myself
Cause I'm working to be like everyone esle
They all past me a few days ago
And some beat me a decade ago
So, I'ma keep rhyming
As long as the suns shining
Cause I know one day it will be my time and
I can't waste my time, living in the shadow of others
Or keeping behind the rest of my brothers
This is a bother, more of an insult
Underestimaters should feel more of the guilt
This is the reasoning all of what I felt
This is the community underground has built
Copyright ©
JuniorWise
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2009-05-04 13:09:42]
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Re: Rising Up
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by Dorisanne on
Sunday, 24th August 2014 @ 06:56:02 AM AEST
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| You have a nice story that could be made better with a smoother flow in what you want to say. |
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Re: Rising Up
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by fredmonte101 on
Tuesday, 16th September 2014 @ 09:37:30 AM AEST
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| Well you expressed yourself quite well! :) To be new one must come to the Lord Jesus and live to please God not mankind. I found you can never please man enough and finally stopped trying to do that and was free to live for God. |
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