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Someone Beautiful Called You . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 08:50:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So
it rain this morning
the sky is some what
gray,
'tis no big deal
for what i feel
is in my heart to
stay
So
the sun is hidding
just playing peekaboo,
a little shy
amidst the sky
for even it loves
you.
Take away
the night and day
include the seasons
to,
were i not born
to live for thee?
and die
in love with
you.
Fools
take love for granted
so snide and cavalier,
becoming cold while
growing old as death
comes crawling
near.
Not i says me
to well i know
for granted i'll not
take,
so powerful
i love you so
i'm
every thing you
make.
Even
when you tease me
with the little things
you do,
all it does is please me
casue i'm so in love with
you.
Seems my heart
just couldn't lose
when finding love so
true,
it just couldn't help
but choose
someone beautiful,
called
you.
Ben
myheartsvoice
&
bjps
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2009-05-04 08:50:55]
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Re: Someone Beautiful Called You . . . Ben
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by 6whiteRoses on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 09:14:27 AM AEST
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awww....very nice!!!!
I LOVE THE FEELING OF LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up
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Re: Someone Beautiful Called You . . . Ben
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 03:11:51 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful. The power of your love is felt strongly here. Great job! |
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Re: Someone Beautiful Called You . . . Ben
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 07:55:02 PM AEST
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Yes, Ben..loves changes everything.... lovely sentiments....
Jenni |
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Re: Someone Beautiful Called You . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 11:57:07 PM AEST
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Beautifull writing as always.
Say hi to joan for me.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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