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Contributed by LashesXX on Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 02:32:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

My head is in a mess right now and I dont know what to do
to change my way of thinking, to be the same as you
to understand you say , , you`ll find the way for me
just look within myself and I will surely see

To read the books you offer and do as I am told
to change the person that I am .. the one you want to hold
and if I was that person , this paragon of right
you`d love me then and want me, each and every night

I`d never be so angry , emotional or wrong
I`d never beg or offer or listen to country songs
I`d survive and never miss you , nor go out on a limb
and of course above all else ..I`d have to be quite slim

If I could only listen, if only I could see ,if only I was someone else ,
well anyone but me
If only I could be that one ,you`d love me unconditionally
and if I didnt question, and if I never planned and if I never faulted.
.then I`d surely understand

So I took the time to look at just where I am going wrong
I hibernate and contemplate and listened to your song
I take my past to pieces ,study and dissect
but could never once find this ..Goddess of perfect

After then much thinking and heavy contemplate ,
I realised that its all over and I have sealed my fate
I know I am wrong in many different ways ,as perfect I am not
I know that I wanted lots of stuff and expected quite a a lot
I know we need be happy ..and maybe thats the key
I`m just sorry you are not happy with person that is me

But I am not sure I can change that or if indeed I should
and if I thought it would matter, I know.. I surely would
but the change would be perpetual and never just quite right
so I surrender .flag up , backing down ..losing of this fight
You deserve someone who is perfect, perfect just for you
and I deserve someone........... who is perfect too

Copyright © LashesXX ... [ 2009-05-04 02:32:41]
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