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Disconnect
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 07:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The threads unravel, one by one
and no new ones are sown.
I am networked but not connected,
cocooned but not transformed
no metamorphosis, but a return
to the soft cradled womb of my becoming
For years I built
friends
family
lovers
career
But its so hard to maintain,
to keep all the balls in the air
and entropy never sleeps
Something always gives;
friends betray
family demands
lovers lose interest;
and work is a hollow lie
when it has no heart
The soft bleating of the herd
clinging to the familiar;
a frail barrier against
the predator thoughts that circle the boundary,
looking for the chink in the armour
- and there it is.
Copyright ©
spike
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2009-05-03 19:52:22]
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Re: Disconnect
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 08:30:21 PM AEST
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Well done, I enjoyed the read.
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Re: Disconnect
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by elle on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 08:51:09 PM AEST
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-and there it is.
Very well done.
elle |
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Re: Disconnect
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by CMkelly on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 10:16:53 AM AEST
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The language in this is very good,
i enjoyed the read,well done.
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Re: Disconnect
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by MorguesMatter on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 02:51:36 AM AEST
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| To lines that speak truth very real -Morgues |
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