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Break Free
Contributed by
akakin
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Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 07:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart wears the armour of soldier in battle.. My blood pumps through ma veins defending ma emotions. My mind spins in circles from all the reasons why my heart beats yet for which reasons are unknown. These feet are binded to process in the direction ma past has set forward, I would like to break free. My hands soft to the touch, but these hands tell stories of rough pain. Two eyes look and see anguish of her mother and when close see rings of fire that I can never distinguish.. Every morning my stomach fills wit a feelings which doesn't consume food. My body eats away at my everyday thoughts of being away and breaking through the chains that hold me down.. Tears fall and hit my cheeks to ignite memories of nights that were cold with fear.. "Cannot run, cannot hide" speaks my conscience that barely exists because I am so many people in one stature.. but still my determination deep down inside will one day break the shield so heart can end the battle and live again.
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Re: Break Free
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 07:35:43 PM AEST
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| very deep. love the analogies. :) |
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Re: Break Free
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by angel_blue on
Monday, 4th May 2009 @ 02:36:35 PM AEST
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| i understand that deep desire to break free, you explain it very well. the first two lines were my favorite! full of emotion...keep writing! |
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