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Goodbye my almost lover
Contributed by
CMkelly
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Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 12:53:34 AM in AEST
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Our love was so itense
nothing made sense
it had gone on too long
i knew this was wrong
you thought everything was just fine
little did you know,that you weren't mine
sometimes i wonder, what if i had stayed
would,we of rowed,fought or betrayed?
i know this is best
you put me to the test.
the ultimate test.
you tried my patience and hurt me again and again
found ways to wind me up seven, eight ,nine ,ten
but still your blue ocean eyes infactuated me
you were more than i could ever be
your pale porcelin skin,soft
just like your heart
and still after so long,you gave me butterflies.
but i said goodbye,
this was that part
goodbye said my heart.
goodbye,my almost lover.
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CMkelly
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2009-05-03 00:53:34]
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Re: Goodbye my almost lover
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 08:34:08 PM AEST
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Interesting piece here, The poem was a thought provoking read, well done.
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Re: Goodbye my almost lover
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by Elipsis on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 12:10:13 AM AEST
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| Odd... But I honestly like this... Need to agree, thought provoking... |
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