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Drowning in Love
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 09:35:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Heart in chains, so weighed down
In shock, in fear, will I drown?
Just as surely as two can do,
I’m drowning in love with you.
Walls to break, war was waged
All to protect heart in cage.
Never sought to feel free,
Yet here you have arms around me.
Fought for air, let me go
I was caught in your undertow.
Farther down the current drew
But I didn’t want to escape you.
Sinking as I surrendered within
Just then, you reeled me in.
As soon as surface bidden adieu,
I allowed myself to drown with you.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2009-04-30 21:35:29]
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Re: Drowning in Love
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 01:18:05 AM AEST
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This is one beautiful write.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Drowning in Love
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 11:03:54 AM AEST
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You know it is real
When you can feel
From the love inside
Such a rushing tide
Nicely done, Thanks for sharing
Peter
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Re: Drowning in Love
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by veronicablue on
Saturday, 3rd April 2010 @ 09:31:23 AM AEST
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| this is exactly what I'm going through now in my life. you state this so eloquently. i aspire to be so talented as you.. |
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