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The Deafening Soundtrack
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 03:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The notes pulse through my veins
Fuelling this rush like adrenalin
Aiding all the corruption
A personal cheer team for destruction
But the colours seep through
And the tune changes
The playlist rolls through my life
Editing what it wants
Pulling on the strings
The spinning makes me dizzy
The loss of control
Evoking the harshest chord
The chord of maniacal enjoyment
The audience stares
Injured in the chaos
The deafening soundtrack
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guiltycircles
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2009-04-30 15:59:21]
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Re: The Deafening Soundtrack
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by angel_blue on
Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 04:56:44 PM AEST
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| I love the musical analogies, being a musician myself. Very colorful and expressive, it actually sounds like a song. Great write! |
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Re: The Deafening Soundtrack
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by anonymous2112 on
Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 08:24:47 PM AEST
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| I agree with the first commentor; I am also a musician, and I loved the way it flows. It really does sound like it could be turned into a song =] |
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Re: The Deafening Soundtrack
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by Secretpoet on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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| Really liked this, real sense of purpose in there, like its moving along and its making you read, good stuff. |
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