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Forever and a day
Contributed by
daniegirl
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Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 03:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lonely stars are out, shining above us through distance,
Looking into your dark green eyes, forever has existance,
The moon in the sky, lighting up the warm somber night,
Holding you close by my side, making everything feel alright,
Far away from home, both of us alone and at peace,
As our new beginning of life, of love will increase,
For the night music, of heart beats and crickets fill the air,
I look at you gracefully, with one passionate stare,
Butterflies in my stomach as i lend you my heart,
Our hands held tightly together, like a delacate piece of art,
I could stay like this forever, knowing that you will feel the same,
Being you and me together, giving love a better name,
holding you close, knowing nothings ever going to be at wrong,
your the reason i am who i am, the reason i am so strong,
Perfect is you in every single way,
can u promise me we ... will be forever and a day?
Copyright ©
daniegirl
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2009-04-28 15:53:35]
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Re: Forever and a day
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by daniegirl on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 03:59:01 PM AEST
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| i tried my hardest to explain how i was feeling so i made this poem |
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Re: Forever and a day
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 04:33:57 PM AEST
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From what I've read it was well said. It was a great poem but what drew me in what the title and I'm glad it did I enjoyed reading it
hope to read more soon
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Re: Forever and a day
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 04:09:33 PM AEST
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A lovely write and the line
"Butterflies in my stomach as i lend you my heart", well that one has just stuck with me now.I think it sums up those nervous feelings of love we all get.
Well done
Steve
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