Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 06:37:09 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Breath

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 12:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

You pushed the breath right out of me
You made a hole where my heart should be
You kissed him right where I could see
And I was lost in this agony...

You stepped on the snow with a demented glance
And set off a roaring avalanche
I cry, I scream, but I know I'm doomed
You're pouring salt into this open wound
If I'm not careful; if I don't keep my sanity
You will surely be the very end of me.

You took the breath right out of me
When we first touched, so gently
Now I fear for my life when you're near
I'm not sure how much longer I can stay here...

Whispering in the dark, how you're sorry, how you care
I turn over and then realize you aren't really there
Just my mind, giving me what my heart needs
Close my eyes in pain as my soul bleeds.

You ripped my heart out of my chest
Can't catch my breath; can't get any rest.

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-04-28 12:37:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by Norb-E on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 01:16:42 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i don't want to say plagiarized, but a lot of these lines are way too similar to the song breath by breaking benjamin. And it tends to follow the beat. Thogh i like where this is going, and maybe the song was a stepping stone, an inspiration of sort, but try to be original as well. It's not necessarily for the outside world, poetry is a way of expressin oneself, so you're ultimately lying to yourself.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com