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Faces
Contributed by
Destiny
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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we pass a person on the street
and judge them by their face
there we go again
judging again
stop
look deeper in their eyes
see that?
see their ate?
see the pain they caused
the pain they've recieved
see their inside face
see the innocence that was killed
falling into abiss of pain
you see the inside
you walk away and ignore it
you know you see the inside face
do you consider yourself wise now?
You might but no one else does.
You had no epiphany
You just realised what you say all along
you fool
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Destiny
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2003-03-26 14:25:00]
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Re: Faces
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by TundraHydra on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:20:14 AM AEST
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| Sometimes I wonder if my inside face shows to everyone around me. I loved it Des |
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Re: Faces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:42:04 AM AEST
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This is a really odd peom but I can't help but love it. I love the message it sends and the imagery. Great work!!
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Re: Faces
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by Destiny on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:49:29 AM AEST
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wow......bad typos...
see their ate?
should be....
see their hate?
lol my bad. Thnx for commenting you guys I'm glad you liked it. And John everyone does see your inside face it's only those who choose to recognize that they see it who can actually act upon it.
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