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Drunk on Love
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 01:59:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love can make you feel drunk or tipsy
But I’ll love you forever
If you love me
Together we’ll be
You and me
Maybe forever
And ever and ever
Together
As it should be
If only you’ll be mine
I’ll be yours till the end of time
Copyright ©
thezenmonkey
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2009-04-28 01:59:48]
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Re: Drunk on Love
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by Drifter on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 05:28:29 AM AEST
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Till dimensions lose controls
And this world will die of holes
Forever and ever
And ever for never
Of fever the lever
And maybe a dealer
And maybe as it should be for never
And ever you and me maybe
Ever heather weather drunk of maybe
This is how I hear you poem, I mean it does make sense, but I think the title should be Drunk on Vodka while writing, the style is like little girl spinning and shouting and spinning and spinning And SPINNING! I almost puked! You Are a Genius! Oh... I take back the "almost"! Where's the bathroom! No offense. Its a nice poem. |
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Re: Drunk on Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 12:00:00 PM AEST
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It is short but to the point, to me it is one of those I am so happy in love sort of poems.
There needs to be more of this type of feeling around these days!!
I liked this
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