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true love
Contributed by
cannabiskilla
on
Sunday, 26th April 2009 @ 11:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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true love
thoughts twisted
tounge tied torture
heart aches
breaks and pains
tearing limbs apart
and hearts the same.
every day is different
but i still dont see the change
waiting for tomorrow to
heal me once again.
love is lost in the bitter truth
and leaves us
dancing on the burning wire
between love and hate
until fickle fate
puts out the fire.
and great men fall
and say ***** it all
as they'r e swinging from the rafter
and their broken heart is singing
through the long and lonely halls
and death comes shortly after.
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cannabiskilla
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2009-04-26 23:24:55]
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Re: true love
(User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on
Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 04:11:20 AM AEST
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Honest oppinion!
Suberb!
Really enjoyed it! |
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Re: true love
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by juricajo on
Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 01:48:30 PM AEST
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| very nice, sounds like my long ago love affiar!! |
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