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Loved ones
Contributed by
darkkai
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
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Parental instincts kick everytime they come.
bringing out the best i can give. how i wish i was a father.
years pass and i still love them,
lookin' after them from afar.
I know they love me too.
My passion to love them lives on,
the strength of ther innnocence
gives me courage.
the funny thing is that they are not mine
all i can say is........
I love you Ivan,
I love you Sahvanna.
Behave.
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darkkai
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2003-03-26 13:45:00]
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Re: Loved ones
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 03:58:38 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this..I can identify with it in a strange way......
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Re: Loved ones
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:14:46 AM AEST
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Great poem. I remember when I used to live with a friend and she had a little boy. I got so atached to him and when I moved out I missed him loads.
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Re: Loved ones
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:36:05 PM AEST
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| Liked your poem it was very sweet. |
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Re: Loved ones
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by darkkai on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 01:48:58 AM AEST
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this poem is connected to A Midnight Vision, I have a thing on protecting children. I still to this day do babysit and watch over most of the kids that live at my apartment complex. Ivan and Sahvanna are my inspiration in writing the poem that u have just read. "The strength of thier innocence give me courage."
this is true when u think hard about the situations and adventures in babysitting. what a fun ride it was, and now too. =o) |
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