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sadness
Contributed by
summer-zhong
on
Saturday, 25th April 2009 @ 04:24:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Leaves are trembling,
Time is frozen,
Walking through the long dark road,
Her heart is stolen......
Waves are laughing,
Beach is hidden,
Swimming cross the ice ocean,
The love is fallen........
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2009-04-25 04:24:42]
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Re: sadness
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by thezenmonkey on
Saturday, 25th April 2009 @ 04:32:46 AM AEST
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Nice play on words I enjoyed the read!
Nice style it's written in a
very relaxing chilled out poem! |
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Re: sadness
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by Mehran on
Sunday, 26th April 2009 @ 10:02:47 AM AEST
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Romantic but sad!
Good imagination especially in "waves are laughing" ans beach is hidden.
Simple and easy to get the feeling.
Comes from a pure and sensitive heart!
I love it and the poet!
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