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Just to Walk Away
Contributed by
thewizard
on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 12:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Walking through school gates
I see you in your big shiny car
You call out my name, smile at me
Though I don't know, who you are
You took away, my life that day
My family and my friends
You said it would not hurt me
This was the start of the end
You said it would be wonderful
Seeing rainbows, pots of gold
Sparkling lights and colours
And treasures I could hold
All I felt was sadness
Sorrow and regret
That day we came together
That fateful day we met
I just wanted to try it
Taste it or maybe smell
Not knowing one day
It would take me to hell
Now alone in darkened doorways
Waiting for you to arrive
Keep me going through the day
Helping me to survive
The pain inside of me
If only you could share
As you feed me more and more
You really just don't care
If only I could see
In the light of day
All I really want to do
Is just, to walk away
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Re: Just to Walk Away
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 12:31:14 PM AEST
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great job!
this was really descriptive and moving |
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Re: Just to Walk Away
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by Sarzie on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:00:45 PM AEST
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| You give people an idea of what it's like to be on the inside. Great job in giving us a glimpse! |
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