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The Story Of The Phantom Part 1
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The_Phantom
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Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 10:08:03 PM in AEST
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People say I don’t write from the heart, that I just copy and paste my works of art,
Though some have cried, but I guess upon my death they’ll realize,
What I write is nothing but the truth, just read the words that’s your proof,
To those that doubt; that’s ok, we all started someplace, mine was a heartbreak,
I was 14 and her name was Melody,
I thought she was the one, my stars, my moon, my day and my sun,
She handed me a note that said goodbye, I felt my whole world crumble before my eyes,
So while I cried I wrote a few words that seemed to rhyme,
Before me lay a poem, a gift I’ve never known of,
I was stunned; where did this come from, thus the beginning of The Phantom,
In the early years it was a side of me seldom seen,
I’d write a poem than throw it a away, it was never to see the light of day,
My thoughts, my dreams, my joy, my pain, my hopes and my wishes,
All put into words then destroyed so no one could listen
So everyday I would write, it helped me though the tough times in my life,
Raised by a single mom, I was taught the basis and how to remain strong,
With a handicap sister; fighting became an everyday thing,
Without a father figure; I became an enemy unto myself with a short trigger,
Friends were hard to come by, but to me that was just fine……
To Be Continued………..
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2009-04-23 22:08:03]
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Re: The Story Of The Phantom Part 1
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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No matter what you had written..you had written them with a fiery heart and with powerful expression.
They are excellent works. Ofcourse this one throws light on your personal life.
March ahead..my friend. :-) venkat
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Re: The Story Of The Phantom Part 1
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 01:36:02 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the peek into the life of our Phantom.
You are so right, writing is at times our best friend , pen and page wont tell our secrets will they?
I loved this, write on
Michelle |
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Re: The Story Of The Phantom Part 1
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by thezenmonkey on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 02:43:26 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem I was raised by a single mum.
I enjoyed reading this poem and look farward
to the next. |
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Re: The Story Of The Phantom Part 1
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 03:34:24 AM AEST
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Well friend,
Please just stay safe so you can finish this write.
Really gonna be fun getting to know you better.
Hope fully your time there will go fast so you can get back home.
Huggs, blesings, prayer,
emy
Oh yeah this is great writing. |
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