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IT WAS CAUSE..

Contributed by tothepoint on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 08:16:32 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

It was cause of me
The debts were getting bigger
It was cause of me
Your marriage fell disastrous
It was cause of me
You had to make a difficult decision
It was cause of me
You chose a son over your husband

Everything I wanted to do you were behind me
We have the same goal with you supporting
Everything I tried to do you tried it with me
We wait in the cold weather for a better tomorrow
Every day at the same spot from yesterday to today
We failed because of my introverted bad intellect
Every way turns poorly from success to poverty..

With two lions wearing thin their hatred
For each other the preparations facing face to face
Circling in rotation like a clock turning clockwise
It was for a meat? Or the respect of the kingdom
The time came near to over throw the other
Of two heads equal in size and distinct in their ages
Brought forth the claws which I overcame with sorrow
The victory in celebration should have been an apology
I should not be crowned king of a throne
Disrespecting the elder was wrong while I was right
For I am irresponsible and a failure as a ….

Because it was cause of me
The debts were getting bigger
It was cause of me
Your marriage fell disastrous
It was cause of me
You had to make a difficult decision
It was cause of me
You chose a son over your husband
Who failed to support his family
It was cause of me
I couldn’t prevent myself for I am
The victim of fate
Who is careless and not prosperous
With my pride I was unable to say..
..I’m sorry and live in peace
With harmony

Copyright Â© tothepoint ... [ 2009-04-23 20:16:32]
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Re: IT WAS CAUSE.. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 01:33:04 AM AEST
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Incredible write, the flow and style perfect.
It is so powerful and very vivid in detail.
You let go of much here.

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