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God’s A Lady.
Contributed by
fanniesson
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Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:26:02 PM in AEST
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Yeah Gods a lady
the bible got it wrong
Heavens down not up.
Gods a lady
and trees feel pain
Separating your garbage
is gonna safe the earth.
Gods a lady
and I never met a Irish Man
that loved whiskey
a black guy on dope
an Italian in the mob
a Jew who wasn’t loved
by everyone.
Gods a lady
& cripples could do
anything they want,
play football, basketball,
ride public transportation
without annoying those
forced to wait those
extra fifteen minutes
while they maneuver themselves
through those eight thousand dollar
hydraulic lift doors
added on to the cost of the fare.
Gods a lady
and police don’t profile
people aren’t prejudge by their skin color,
nationality, sexual preference, gender.
Yeah God’s a Lady
that explains everything
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fanniesson
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2009-04-23 17:26:02]
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Re: God’s A Lady.
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 08:42:34 PM AEST
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it may explain everything and yet I still understad nothing after reading this. I'm doubtful there is a god but I did like the play on Stereotypes
great write
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Re: God’s A Lady.
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 02:06:55 AM AEST
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You always put such interest and twists in your poetry.
I like this, a friend of mine and I think that also sometimes lol......
Good work
Michelle |
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Re: God’s A Lady.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:12:26 AM AEST
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lol very good indeed, very clever.
-Phil |
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Re: God’s A Lady.
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by Matariel on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 11:08:11 AM AEST
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While I disagree with the premise, this poem does have some merit. It flowed nicely, and ended nicely.
Though I have to say; God technically isn't male or female, since He's a Spirit. But you must've been using it as a way to usurp the patriarchal nature of society then. Either way, the poem has good points to it.
On the other hand, are you parodying the left-wing, Green spiritualists? It seems almost like a parody on the "recycling garbage" and "trees feel pain" line, so the poem could actually be saying the opposite of its face value. I don't know though. |
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