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make me happy
Contributed by
sand_paper_tears
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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make me happy
tell me why
i feel so good,
but i'm dying inside
ease my pain
tell me how
to pick myself up
when i am down
make me happy
tell my why
i feel so worthless
why do i cry?
ease my pain
tell me how
to make myself smile
instead of always frown
make me happy
tell me why
i feel so good
but i'm dying inside
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Re: make me happy
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:46:16 AM AEST
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| yah, i can sure relate and u express it in such a way that readers can really feel your words.. good stuff |
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Re: make me happy
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:45:10 PM AEST
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good write, good expression of feelings
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Re: make me happy
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:53:20 AM AEST
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Great poem and I love the way you have expressed yourself and even the way you have laid the lines out adds to the effect. Keep up the good work.
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Re: make me happy
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 02:50:27 PM AEST
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| You've just expressed the feelings of probably every teenager at one point in time. Very good..... |
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