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It Is True
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
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Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 03:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I still remember when they said we wouldn't make it
That we wouldn't last more than a day
They said we weren't strong enough to make it
But is your arms is where I am today.
I recall when they waited for us to lose it
When they waited for us to fall apart
They thought they knew that we would lose it
But I am still the only one in your heart
And I can feel you within me; within my soul
When I'm with you, I know that you make me whole
And I love you so much; you don't even know
They can stand by, in shock, and watch our love continue to grow...
I still remember the first time we said "I love you"
When we made it past the six month mark
It's been almost a year now
And I can still feel that same old spark
Hold me now, while we're together
Tell me I'm the only one right for you
Whisper in my ear; tell me "forever"
Feel my body against you; know it is true.
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MoonlightKiss
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Re: It Is True
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by RyhmeNotReason on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:02:42 PM AEST
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another great one moonlightkiss... i'm starting to become a fan of your work. This one reminds me very much of when I first started dating my ex. All our friends said we were crazy and it wouldn't last a week... we were together and happy for almost 8 years before she passed.
" When I'm with you, I know that you make me whole
And I love you so much; you don't even know"
How many times I have said or thought these exact words....extaordinary poetry.
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Re: It Is True
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:33:18 AM AEST
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may it continue into eternity. a fine write, a beautiful story.
best wishes,
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Re: It Is True
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by Sarzie on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 11:25:25 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful story. You make rhyming a part of the poem without making it the focus. Keep them coming :)
Sarzie |
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