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Thought I Lost You

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 03:12:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Lying here, in the pouring rain
Bleeding, barely breathing
Every beat of my heart could be the last
And, distraught, you will not find me
You don't know where I am
And you won't be here to listen
To the words I whisper, so feebly
"I love you..."

I whimper your name
Over
And over
I think the pain is taking
Over
And over
I'm hallucinating
Because I can hear your voice
Feel your hands
Trying to stop the bleeding
I feel your lips on mine
Breathing air into my aching lungs
But I fear it's too late
I am dying...

You pick me up in your strong arms
I feel something wet on my cheek
Blood
Rain
Or a tear
I can't tell, but I feel my body
Yes, I can feel again
I feel the jolt as the doctors
Shock my heart back to life
Jump-start my silent chest
It nearly fails, but continues
As I struggle to breathe
My lungs scream for air

Am I alive?
I'm right in between

Somebody, grab my hand
And pull me back
Or push me over
Somebody, end this agony

Suddenly, I can breathe
There's something providing
Cool, fresh air
I open my eyes
Forcing my vision to focus

And I see
I see you
You hold me in your arms
Whisper against my hair
"My baby, thank God...

I thought I lost you."

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-04-23 15:12:26]
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Re: Thought I Lost You (User Rating: 1 )
by RyhmeNotReason on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 04:40:23 PM AEST
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Wow moonlightkiss... absolutely amazing. I dont even know where to start.... front to back, top to bottom rivetting. Chilled to the bone.. I can't say enough about this one 5 stars for sure.

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