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I've had enough
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 06:21:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Go on kill me now, I’ll just lay down and die, you think you’ve had enough – well so have I!
I’ll take nothing with me, there’s nothing you can give me,
that I’ll be grateful for – for I don’t care about anything anymore,
I hear a knock on my door – Go Away!! – I don’t even know you any more,
why are you knocking on my door,
why the clock is still tick tocking for – I can never be sure – but
– I don’t care – anymore!!
Copyright ©
thezenmonkey
... [
2009-04-23 06:21:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I've had enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 07:53:00 AM AEST (User
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Even without the bad language, I can still feel the anger and frustration...good job! |
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Re: I've had enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by AchingSoul on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 08:46:21 AM AEST (User
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This poem is really heartfelt!
Great poem :) |
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