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Life
Contributed by
wynter
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Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 04:12:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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She is motion and movement, steady and unrelenting
Time passes and she strangles it into submission
glowing like a winter moon
To know her is to appreciate her
A worthy adversary
A dance of deadly wills
Her beauty reflects a subtle hint
Perhaps you may escape
The paradox that is her need
Has anyone loved their fear as prey
Been lost in the dance of life
Yet found when she comes to call
I have seen my very chains
And cast them off at times
Yet only to miss their weight
How long will I hope to hope
What comfort in a pipers dream
That ends without a change
Blindly I will follow the road
Regardless of the night
She beckons me
Copyright ©
wynter
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2009-04-22 16:12:33]
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Re: Life
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by elle on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 04:21:27 PM AEST
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Excellent first post. I especially like
" I have seen my very chains
and cast them off at times
Yet only to miss their weight."
Very compelling & I enjoyed it. peace elle
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Re: Life
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by RyhmeNotReason on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:03:23 PM AEST
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| Wow, great stuff. I was actually going to quote the same lines that elle did. Powerful.. powerful words. Bravo |
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Re: Life
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:10:16 PM AEST
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Yes so was I Elle stole the lines lol.
Incredible verse here.
I loved the end too
Regardless of the night
She beckons me.
I could say lots about following a road real and imagined but those days are over lol.
Good work
Michelle |
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