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Contributed by
dcsurf
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Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 08:32:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Home over the horizon
Hoping just to gain a peek
Of what has so long left me
And all that I still seek
The warmth of hearth and family
No longer seems in reach
For something just as soothing
Is all that I still seek
So much of me now gone from here
No longer to be seen nor felt
How I wish for just a moment
to remember how it felt
Just above me something beckons
Could it be the well
Just over the horizon
The last escape from Hell
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2009-04-22 08:32:13]
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Re: Home
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by funmi on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 10:26:00 AM AEST
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| very touching poem.... :) |
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Re: Home
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 11:59:34 AM AEST
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| yes, it was touching. i liked it |
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Re: Home
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by Scribbler on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:06:08 PM AEST
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I can definitely relate to this subject. I loved this poem, it was an amazing read. The three, four lined, stanzas are traditional yet fit perfectly within the intended tone.
Excellent :-) |
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