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Dreams
Contributed by
insane_outsider
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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In a dream all night long, and
In a dream which keeps me strong, and
In a dream you came to me, and
In a dreamI feel extacy.
In my dreams there is much bliss, and
In my dreams the real world i don't miss, and
In my dreams I care for you, and
In my dreams you love me too.
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2003-03-26 09:05:00]
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:24:57 AM AEST
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I realise that this is the whole poinmt of this poem is dreams but I think you use the word a bit too much. Just an opinion. I really liked it though.
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Re: Dreams
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:48:22 PM AEST
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keep dreaming
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