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a weight off my chest

Contributed by justme03 on Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 04:41:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



like an elephant in the room it sits there.
and we go about our business and try to ignore it,
but nothing will take away from what i did to you.

everything is the same, but
EVERYTHING is different.

how to go back to what we once had?
how do i move something back into place
when it is massive and unmovable?

lost for the right words to say to you.
i dont know how to make this better.
maybe i cant, but please give me another chance.

i know ive had so many already,
and i dont deserve another one.
but just know i do love you.
and if you love me too we can get through this.
i will do everything in my power to prove that i love you.

i didnt do what i did because i dont love you.
baby, you know there were other reasons.
none of it had anything to do with you.
but , i guess in a way. . .it was about you.

about you in the way that i cant be what you want me to be.
and im sorry.
its tearing me apart. . .

but change is in the air.
i can taste it on my lips.
just wait. . .
please. . .wait.
i would wait for you.
my love.




Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2009-04-21 16:41:19]
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Re: a weight off my chest (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 05:45:08 PM AEST
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You captured a pouring of feeling heart and soul within this write.

Maybe you should show it to the person ey??

Michelle


Re: a weight off my chest (User Rating: 1 )
by RyhmeNotReason on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 01:26:21 AM AEST
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been there justme03.. this one really touched a nerve.. I guess thats the sign of good writing. By the way... I agree with michelle, kinda silly to share it with us and not the person it was written for.


Re: a weight off my chest (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 10:04:38 AM AEST
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im too scared to show it to him. it seems he doesnt understand my poetry at all. he just kinda laughs and makes me feel like im a horrible writer. :( maybe thats not what it really is...but thats what i feel. idk how to really explain that. thanks for your comments.




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