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The Sun That Sets
Contributed by
crookedpoet09
on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 04:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Times are changing, I'm chained to my hands
Underneath my desk lies my torn up plan
Time after time I feel cold from your touch
And whenever you jump, it hurts too much
Every cloud that drifts across the sky
I skip a bronze coin over the water's eye
Say a wish for the gem that sets over it's lashes
And below the diamonds that sound like crashes
To turn to your door would take a soul of strength
Something I do not have my dear, in length
One wave goodbye, and you're lying in the dirt
Is it my fault you're too weak to stop the burn?
I don't think so Gracie
So stop shouting please
I'm not going to save you
But I will respect you still
I'm by the church garden
Hearing black birds rave
Standing with quivering hands
Putting one rose on your grave
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crookedpoet09
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2009-04-21 16:27:28]
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Re: The Sun That Sets
(User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 04:37:00 PM AEST
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What really got me was to flow and the rhyme might be one and the same I don't know
great write. Some of the lines confused me but lately that's not hard to do.
anyway I enjoyed reading it
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: The Sun That Sets
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:02:06 PM AEST
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| omg i liked this. good for your first poem! |
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