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The Shadow Stalker Walker
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 08:39:35 AM in AEST
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I am a lone walker, I chose my path alone, I walk a lonely road, the only road I know – no one but the shadow beside me, to keep me company walks behind me – it mimics my every move, as if it knows what I’m gonna do, before I even knew – the shadow stalker walker, walks his own road, winding, curving, leading to his own abode, hence he walks a road, the one that only he knows! In the sunlight he grows, when the night comes he goes, where does he go – to his own abode, somewhere that only he can go! Because only he knows the road!
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Re: The Shadow Stalker Walker
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 05:43:22 PM AEST
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The title caught my interest to begin with.
You also captured my attention with the subject
in this as well.
I do like the write, but something that always puts if a bit off for me in this type of style in which it is written.
I would love to read this over once more in stanza form, or maybe even couplet form??
Good work and walk away from the shadows!!
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Re: The Shadow Stalker Walker
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by MoonlightKiss on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 12:01:12 PM AEST
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| the title got me too. interesting format, almost like a paragraph, but i liked it. it reminds me of 'Boulevard of Broken Dreams'. |
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