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Those Dark Feelings...
Contributed by
sublime_suicide
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
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I realize the demons have posessed me again.
My head is throbbing, my ears are pounding.
All of a sudden I can hear the silence.
All of a sudden I can see what's invisible.
My nightmares are coming true.
The darkness is spreading to all corners of the room.
What little comfort I have left vanishes
as my last candle flickers and dies.
I'm too afraid to move, too afraid to cry.
All I can feel is the cold.
All I can see is the dark.
It's like a thousand hands are touching me
And I feel like I'm barely alive.
Nobody can help me now.
I keep wishing that I'd die.
The darkness overtakes me.
All the love I have is sucked away.
I can not stop this evil,
It will not go away.
All the warm feelings I used to have
are broken on the floor.
I know all hope is gone now,
my soul is lost forevermore.
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:49:28 AM AEST
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| this is amazing...i know exactly how you feel...beautiful... |
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:58:16 PM AEST
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well written i can feel your pain...please hang in there your talent needs to be shared with others who feel the same
Sharon |
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by mystical_illusion on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:49:51 PM AEST
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I liked this poem very much, full of emotion, and very creative.
Great job
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by mystical_illusion on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:50:03 PM AEST
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I liked this poem very much, full of emotion, and very creative.
Great job
-kelly |
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:49:52 PM AEST
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this is so sad, but a powerful write.
know exactly where you're coming from, PM me if u ever feel like a chat
x_x_x |
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Re: Those Dark Feelings...
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by adsalamon on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 03:00:52 PM AEST
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| :) |
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