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Abyss
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Into the abyss,
I have been thrown.
Pushed to death's kiss?
Into the unknown.
Rushing downward,
Faster then slower.
Perhaps homeward?
Farther and farther.
But in the depths of the darkness,
A whisper is heard,
Barely audible,
Save a few simple words...
"A dream..."
Can it truly be?
Or a nightmare is it?
I wish I could see.
So my eyes are bound,
Now I can tell,
But I feel nothing,
Would this be hell?
......
Yes it is clear now,
My heart is surely bound as well.
This is no dream, but a nightmare.
My own personal hell.
For I am so cold,
I feel so alone,
My heart bare as bone,
Nothing on which to hold...
Consumed by the darkness,
Held tight in it's grasp,
Until flooded by light,
In it's warmth I long to bask...
So here I shall wait,
Here in this hell,
Ever so cold,
And lonely as well.
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2003-03-26 06:35:00]
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Re: Abyss
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:01:47 PM AEST
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good write i guess i am starting to like the darker poetry for i have found so many talented poets.
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Re: Abyss
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 08:30:44 PM AEST
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You're well on your way to be a great writer.
Great job.
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Re: Abyss
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:39:12 PM AEST
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| excellent! hugs nessa |
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