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balance
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 03:59:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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A puddle of fallen petals
tender. . .
rests undisturbed beneath
our favored tree.
spring brushed by
majestic. . .
a gentle giving,
a tranquil opportunity.
as your absence lingers
spellbound. . .
I implore
solitude. . . serenity. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-04-19 15:59:34]
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Re: balance
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 08:38:27 PM AEST
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A quiet, Gentle, Beautiful picture comes to view.
Great write.
Deadwriter
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Re: balance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 10:23:53 PM AEST
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| Every adjective you used in this poem describes this poem. Lovely. |
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Re: balance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 04:20:12 PM AEST
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very light and dreamy, it carried me off.....
-phil |
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Re: balance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 08:03:41 PM AEST
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elle, this reminds me of lying next to a peacefully flowing stream.
You don't really notice its there, but that's the beauty of it--it fills the
senses but you don't need to see it, touch it, taste it or smell it to
know how beautiful and moving it is. There is a calmness to this
piece, just like that of the stream.
Absolutely comforting ~
~ Breezy
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