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Life
Contributed by
Loende
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Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 09:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dig a ditch you told me, and bury all your fear,
Then let your tears be washed along,
So far away from here.
When you love, love fully, embraced with all your heart,
So when you find the one for you,
You’ll know it from the start.
Speak the truth and often, to people in your life,
Don’t go to bed with grudges held,
That only fosters strife.
Do random acts of kindness, but not for any gain,
Prove to the world that there is hope,
And so much more than pain.
When you laugh, laugh freely, and loud for all to hear,
For laughter shared with everyone,
Will only bring more cheer.
Dance amidst the raindrops, not caring who will see,
Show everyone who dares to look,
That you are blessed and free.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2009-04-18 21:53:27]
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:55:08 PM AEST
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| Sorry, d, you'll get no critiquing from me. :-) Just that I like it. It is very good solid advice put in a wonderfully poetic setting. I wish everyone would listen to you and live by these words. |
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Re: Life
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by venkat on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 11:18:32 PM AEST
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This is very refreshing and uplifting..
I know the value of life. If we take it in a positive way there is happiness and freedom..
By speaking truth I enjoyed its benefits through out my life. Thanks for sharing a beautiful write:-) venkat
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Re: Life
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 04:30:29 AM AEST
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A wonderful portrait once again....
views of a life well led....
Great Write!
Steve |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 11:17:24 AM AEST
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You always speak with such wisdom dawn ... and makes me feel so incomplete.
(This is a good thing, I assure you)
It never fails to impress me how much strife and ill fate you've endured and
yet still find the peace of mind to speak of patience, kindness, love, but
most of all, forgiveness. I imagine this could be read as a mantra every
morning, or as a prayer each and every night. It is sound advice to pass
on to our children. And it is great advice we should all give ourselves.
You never cease to amaze, my dear. It is such a joy to know you.
~ Breezy
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Re: Life
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 08:34:08 AM AEST
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| The best poem and advice that i have read in a long time. |
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