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Contributed by
XXXsilvervoodooXXX
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Trapped in the past, seems I’ve frozen my fate,
Forged a destiny set in stone,
Inside I see what lies ahead,
An image of myself forever alone.
Destroyed dreams have taken over my soul,
These wounds will never heal,
How these eyes were so blind,
To something that could never be real.
Endless pain bleeds deep inside my heart,
Causing any love to fade away,
Desperation binds all within,
An emotional suicide comes to play.
Standing now just another hollow existence,
A memory of who I used to be,
Shattered vision, all is black
These darkened eyes no longer see
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XXXsilvervoodooXXX
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2003-03-26 04:45:00]
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:48:02 AM AEST
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Such a dark, desperate feeling to all of your poetry. I hope this doesn't truly refelct how you feel about your life. The poetry is very raw and emotional. Makes for very good reading.
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Re: Empty
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:29:27 AM AEST
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| You have looked inside my heart ... I can't believe how close to these feelings I feel ... an excellent poem. .. Jan |
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Re: Empty
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by springchic1979 on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:39:17 PM AEST
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This poem was so depressingly morbid! I Loved it...Thought you did an excellnt job.
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Re: Empty
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by fancyface4898 on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 04:32:17 PM AEST
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| very dark but very good. |
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