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Embracing the darkness
Contributed by
shelby
on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 07:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Visions delight the eyes at midnight
reflections of all that we see.
At one with the fine tune of our crimson reunions
who is so bold to challenge our belief?
We stroll in the eve of your nightmares
the soft touch upon the back of your neck
why do you fear those who wear cloaks of black?
when beauty befalls all that touch us.
Embrace us for the difference......
bask in the dim fading light
twilight is but embers beginning
the end to our midnight delight.
We are the shiver, the tremble the terror
it may only be in your mind......
gather collective thoughts for one moment
settle a deal at the choosing of your time.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-04-17 19:01:37]
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Re: Embracing the darkness
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:04:08 PM AEST
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I don't do vampires but this is well written.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Embracing the darkness
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 09:10:14 PM AEST
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| nicely done. raw and grisly |
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Re: Embracing the darkness
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by Loende on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 10:48:29 PM AEST
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MMMMMMMM....I LOVE this. I AM this. Gosh, this just feels like a fine wine. I LOVE the heaviness that was underlining it, as all good Vampy stuff does. This was so delightful, from your images to the rhythm. Just a total pleasure to read. Fantastic job.
Luff,
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Re: Embracing the darkness
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 09:11:22 AM AEST
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been a while since i have seen you post a vampire write. I really enjoyed it. As I do all of your poems.
Rich |
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