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Pain In Disguise
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 04:46:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Pain in Disguise
by: PepperMint
Ki$$e$
2008/09 orig
Poetry
Time passes by
right before
my eyes,
I watch as
my life
silently
dies......
Can
anyone
see the
Pain
Deep
Inside?....
My own
reflection
when I
look into the
Mirror I
sometimes
don't even
Recognize.............
I'm lost,
and
I'm Confused
to scared to
Realize,
I can't even
look into
my
own eyes
So I put on
my
Daily
Disguise,
The only thing
i can treasure
that i can
call mine are
the Tears I cried................................
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
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2009-04-17 16:46:11]
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 05:03:05 PM AEST
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it had a good flow to it, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 06:02:56 PM AEST
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I also liked the flow in this.
This also has content in it everyone can relate to.
Good work.
Welcome to YPDC
Michelle |
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by Aspirant on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 06:38:27 AM AEST
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| Just curious if you listen to Linkin Park because many parts of it reminded me of a few of their songs. Then again, as someone else mentioned these are fairly universal themes. |
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 07:18:06 AM AEST
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| Yes, very easy to relate to. Regardless of that, I think it was very well put together. |
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by the-phoenix on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:53:26 AM AEST
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keep up buddy!
you have it
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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| I agree that it has a nice flow. The feel is good too. Liked your use of the peppermint candy |
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Re: Pain In Disguise
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by Jlokitty on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:35:49 PM AEST
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| really enjoyed it. Good job =) |
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