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If you never tell a lie
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 09:37:30 PM in AEST
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If you never tell a lie
you never have to remember a thing
but I think I’m going to cry
because the concept makes my head ring
Because a lie is not told
no a lie has to be sold
So that everyone will believe
the lie that you’ve conceived
I have to much on my mind
and as hard as I try
I can’t stop and cry
Because after time
I got the concept
but it’s something I couldn’t accept
because lately
I’ve had to remember everything
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2009-04-16 21:37:30]
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Re: If you never tell a lie
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by 3660Days on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 11:40:49 PM AEST
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I rather liked lines 5 and 6.
Oh, and lines 1-2....SO TRUE! |
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Re: If you never tell a lie
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by ever1der on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 01:39:16 AM AEST
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| I just caught someone in a lie and it's because she couldn't remember the lie she told the first time. This write is tooo true. |
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